The genderbent dude has bigger boobs than another female character, check. The fox spirit seems to be a tsundere, check. This is a good setup for a comedy.
@Anime_is_average Not sure where the translation for the first page came from. "Sister is breakfast ready?" and "I'd like toast" seem unnecessarily improvised.
Also the second page is mistranslated. Some lines are missing, like:
私のこと…明のことは覚えてないと…?
...but you're saying you don't remember me, Mei?
ちょうどこっちの高校入ったからつい昨日越してきてあげたのに!
And after all I went through moving in yesterday cause I got in a high school nearby!
(Or something like that with a tad more proofreading.)