Asahina Wakaba & Her Chubby-Chubby Boyfriend

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uuuuuuuuuuuuugggghhhhhh
god the fl is getting kinda annoying, like rlly this could be solved if she just confess that she actually developed feelings for him along the way
like idk all u gotta say is "what i did was horrible and im really sorry. although i know that there's nothing i can do to make you forgive me, i just wanted to let uk that while it may have been fake in the beginning but along the way my feelings for u started to grow into something real" or some corny shit like that and done.
 
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Bruh every time I see the miserable or sad side of her I always think of Yuri from doki doki literature club
 
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This was a great story. No shying away from the dark side of bullying, no taking it too far, everything getting wrapped up nicely is a huge plus.
Overall this was a fantastic read. Life isn't always as easy as we make it out to be just because we see it or have done it.. not everyone acts or reacts in the same ways and even characters are created by authors to have their own personalities.

I personally think this story was executed phenomenally, and if you're someone like me who tends to check the last page of the comments section to see what people think of it, then I'd recommend giving this a read!
 
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A nice self-contained story for a couple hours' read, not too long, not too short. It has two themes: romance and bullying, and both are executed quite well. The story culminates by about chapter 13, and the culmination feels really intense, but the denouement still appears a bit rushed - could use maybe a chapter or two more of pure fluff.
All in all, still, pretty great, 9/10.
 
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Sweeeet...
kinda feel bad for Asahina-san
But I'm happy tho with the ending🥺
 
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A good story, but I find more realistic a fantasy Isekai that this story
You can play over 100 Eroges, do infinite time travels, and you never will do each flag what the MC did
 
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The last few chapters completely killed the mood for me (and i know i'm not alone on this).
The execution and resolution was bad. Bad guys didn't get any punishment. Nor did those who were lying (the little bitch who didn't tell about the mirror costing 500 yen and the FMC. Their only punishments were their "emotions" of self pity because the jig was up. Crying and being looked down upon for at most 1 day.

Not trying to be the edge-lord here, not saying that they must be pummeled.
As an example of adult world: Parents called and had discussion with the bully threesome as well as formal apology in front of the class.
Little bitch should at least formally apologize to FMC and fuck off to the nebula (stay the fuck quet as she was the last 6 months).
FMC takes more responsibility than little bitch. Formal apology to everyone in Haruto class, apology to Haruto and spilling the beans to her family (bitch threw some shit towards family so they need to know why).
As for Haruto? Love is blind, were i in his place? Dunno, if i was in his age i would forgive and continue. In my age though, i might verbally say i forgive but i will never forget and relationship would stop at this moment.
The gravity of her decisions just shows how bad of a person she is and how she would react in the future in case she is stressed, bullied, blackmailed and etc. She as a person showed the worst qualities a person can have under pressure:

Succumbing to bullying - (that's okay, it shows your weak but that's okay, many of us are)
Pressured into hurting another person - (that's a grave quality to have, one thing is when you endure bullying "because you can manage" the other thing is when you due to your weakness, agreed to HURT another person. Fake confession thing and playing the lover is one of the most cruelest thing you could do, it's not rare that due to that sort bullying people self deleted themselves.
Not spilling the truth (after she has understood it was wrong) - Simply shows of dishonesty. Just an example, if she were to cheat by "accident" she would bury the truth and would keep continuing burying it deeper (Hey twice or thrice doesn't matter after you've already done once)
Unstable under stress - We all show our true self's under stress, she wasn't pretty under it. (Not a very bad thing but just part of her cons)
Plain stupid - She somewhat already knew beforehand that he was friends with powerful people in school yet decided to screw with the "fat guy" because general notion was that he is hated by everyone. Even when she understood that this a big fat lie that was due to her stupidity she still continued the sharade. Next point on being stupid is the 10.000 yen thing, she could ask for a receipt (if it were a large amount i would ask for proof of cost and involve other people, including my parents if the bill was to high, i would repay my parents but i would do anything not to screw or hurt other people) or ask her parents (if you truly love your parents and parents loved you, you wouldn't shy away of asking them for help).
Instead she decided that 10k yen ($65) is good enough to ruin someone mentally.

The concept of punishment game and fake love confession is well known in Japan. As the matter of fact it is so well known that everyone knows it's plain evil and worst of the worst things to do. If the general public will know about this everyone would isolate the fake confesser. Japan is quite keen on isolating spoiled apples.


As an adult i cannot in my sober mind think of this girl as anything good. Where it mattered she failed at every point. She didn't resolve anything and was carried by the kind hearted chubby guy with his ultra competent classmates. She literally didn't do anything of worth, instead collapsing, crying and venting frustration towards everyone. With all the minuses i described above you cannot simply ascribe it to her age. Too many flaws to fix, over pampered child who needs some ass whooping and reality check. Teenagers are a big pile of mess due to their emotional (hormonal) instability but it doesn't mean that they stupid or don't have any moral compass. They can be too stubborn or rash but moral compass isn't something that is created in teenage years or later on it is created from the inception and build upon. Her moral compass has rotten fundament.
I was quite a rotten apple myself but never to this extent, i played pranks but tried not to damage the people too much and at their ages (10 or 11 grade in manga) her decisions and actions are too bad/childish.
 
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