Look I just hate corrupt militarys. It hits too close to home... you can make them tolerable to read, but this one's tailored for Slimy Dictatorship rather than a Military Junta. Might be good, but the type of apocalypse used isn't really.... desired. They went with mutation and monsters.... it'd been better to use one of those and introduce more later to make it seem like things are happening behind the scenes..... also do we even have a Military PoV for a zombie apocalypse? Probably would be better imo