Asmodian's Contract - Ch. 2
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Just some ranting about the art
Well some panels aren't showing on mine and I might be wrong or miss a few things, but overall the coloring is amazing
Page 6, I don't think the white surprise(or whtver u call it) blends with the color smudge, they give a different feeling; the smudge gives a comically surprised feeling while the former shows a slightly calmer response. Also, the color smudge is a bit... off?
Page 7, I think the demon's shoulder is a little too broad for women, she looks like a male (she looks like a character coming straight from Tower of God, no offense), and the arm is... a little too big.
The same goes for that on page 9, except she doesn't look like a ToG character and that the hand proportion gets a little more fitting. Is it the nose?
Proportion on page 12 (mirror) and dignified scene, uh-oh
Page 22 when she looks at her own hand, why does it feel like sth is off?
Page 7, I think the demon's shoulder is a little too broad for women, she looks like a male (she looks like a character coming straight from Tower of God, no offense), and the arm is... a little too big.
The same goes for that on page 9, except she doesn't look like a ToG character and that the hand proportion gets a little more fitting. Is it the nose?
Proportion on page 12 (mirror) and dignified scene, uh-oh
Page 22 when she looks at her own hand, why does it feel like sth is off?
Well some panels aren't showing on mine and I might be wrong or miss a few things, but overall the coloring is amazing
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LMAO. The payment. What was the point of the contract then? That princess got lucky! I'm loving our new MC already! She's stupidly cute!
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HAHAHA SHE FORGOT HER PAYMENT i thought that the princess soul vanishing is an automatic payment but that ending tho
