Asumi-chan is Interested in Lesbian Brothels! - Vol. 5 Ch. 18

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She went into "Hunt" mode :worry:

Still hoping for them to end up together, my last statement still stands:shamihuh:
 
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I can't, i just can't. The fact that the premise is so easily forgotten just bother me too much to enjoy what happen. Just, why the fuck put a premise if you throw it out of the window half way through the story ? Like, so far you could have done without the childhood friend part and nothing will have changed much but we have it and it bothers people like me too much and waste my enjoyment.
 
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I can't, i just can't. The fact that the premise is so easily forgotten just bother me too much to enjoy what happen. Just, why the fuck put a premise if you throw it out of the window half way through the story ? Like, so far you could have done without the childhood friend part and nothing will have changed much but we have it and it bothers people like me too much and waste my enjoyment.
My problem with most isekais out there.

But consider it this way. If it weren't for Mai, Asumi wouldn't have gotten out there and this scene woulda probably played out very differently. There's development for Asumi in going to the brothel, though, it is kinda subtle.
 
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I can't, i just can't. The fact that the premise is so easily forgotten just bother me too much to enjoy what happen. Just, why the fuck put a premise if you throw it out of the window half way through the story ? Like, so far you could have done without the childhood friend part and nothing will have changed much but we have it and it bothers people like me too much and waste my enjoyment.
It’s smut. or do you watch porn for the plot too?
 
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Awwww, they are making love.

It's gonna be so sad when we continue with the whole brothel thing while Asumi tries to find her friend, but I hope we have some kind of resolution for Nanao too. Fuck it, this girl is my pick I don't give an F
 
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It’s smut. or do you watch porn for the plot too?
Just because it's smut doesn't mean it can't have story. The erotic elements can be very effective in enhancing the story and the characters.

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Refer to the middle paragraph. This is the afterword of the 3rd chapter of 16bit Sensation by Wakaki Tamiki. Eroticism being used to enhanced other elements of the story is not a new thing.
 

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