At the Northern Fort - Ch. 32

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Yes, bc losing control of your power and nearly killing what you think are your loved one's children (and the mother) will definitely make him love you. What a dumb reason for a conflict, and Mil and Kugalg nearly getting injured, possibly killed bc of it smfh, dumb bish
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I’m kinda getting tired of this, protagonist feels very passive and detached from conflicts that arise, most of which feel inconsequential and easily rectifiable if characters just used their brains and mouths. Fluff can only go so far, either you commit to fluff, or you develop more meaningful conflicts you can’t have your cake and eat it too.
 
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Um, so wait is their solution just convince her that Waterust is the dad? Wont she then just attack Kugalg's mother then? (or was his mom already out of the picture) Ether way it doesn't deal with the root problem of her being a yandere who is attacking even kids. She dam well better not get her way after this.
 
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So we just gonna ignore now she tried killing the children, because she was jealous ? <_< (She said teasing, but without those Soldiers they'd be dead)
 
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I'm sorry is she dumb? Like legitimately stupid. The logic here makes no sense. How the hell is them having two children at the same time PROOF that they hooked up?

Granted I know little about spirits reproduction, so like can men give birth? Is there an exchange where the male and female spirit both give birth to the children? But then we've not seen a single pair of spirit kids to date from both parents. The only other possibility is having twins, but is that like not rare or something?

I mean there's literally nothing liking the two having actually hooked up other than "he's always asking her", but like did she block out the part where Snowlea's always saying no? It sounds like they spent quite a lot of time together at one point or another.

Like I'm just trying to contextualize this. She found out her crush had a son and her crush's crush had a daughter around the same age. Not that they had gotten together mind you, but that they grew up and had a kid. And her immediate thought was that he wore her down and they pumped out two kids within months of each other.... and that made sense to her? Not only that it made so much sense she wouldn't listen to the person in question telling her it's ridiculous?

Sounds like they need to make a mental ward for spirits. Even Mr. Flame-O isn't that much of an overbearing hothead. He has no tact and is about to be canceled with his words, but he doesn't get aggressively violent over it and isn't full on delusional.
 
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I’m kinda getting tired of this, protagonist feels very passive and detached from conflicts that arise, most of which feel inconsequential and easily rectifiable if characters just used their brains and mouths. Fluff can only go so far, either you commit to fluff, or you develop more meaningful conflicts you can’t have your cake and eat it too.
Well even tho shes a Spirit shes also a kid, her not directly engaging in conflicts make Sense, the issue honestly is that the manga isnt going anywhere, after she reaches the fort ages ago the chapters are Just random problems or fluff on the fort, while that isnt a problem per se, It is a problem for a fantasy manga, which is known for world building and scenarios
 
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keep calm, self. as snowlea said, she's still immature.

but really though, did the author really think this would be a good story arc?? I'm glad waterloo or something is seen again tho and even meets with snowlea or whatever her name was again hehehe
 
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Tfw your maybe mom tries to kill you AND sibling zone you
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Mythologies are all full of gods wreaking worse havoc for less, so the drama here is not exactly out of line. Just wasn't expecting teenage soapy drama in my snowy fluff.

Snake fairies are cute tho :win:
 
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Well even tho shes a Spirit shes also a kid, her not directly engaging in conflicts make Sense, the issue honestly is that the manga isnt going anywhere, after she reaches the fort ages ago the chapters are Just random problems or fluff on the fort, while that isnt a problem per se, It is a problem for a fantasy manga, which is known for world building and scenarios
That’s my point either you go hard into slice of life fluff, with mostly self-contained chapters with the occasional double chapter storylines. Or you properly build up the protagonist to be able to respond to conflicts that feel justified and non-extraneous, that are also more complex then just “talk it out”.
 

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