Attacking the Girls' Dormitory of the Demon King - Vol. 10 Ch. 92 - Going home

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Well I hope you all enjoyed one of the endings of all time in one of the story's to ever exist. This would honestly work as an ending to an arc, but as an ending to the entire thing...it leaves a bit to be desired.

The main things I wished this story did: Marcia being an assassin is almost completely irrelevant, hell it's barely even relevant that she's athletic and I wish the author tried to make Marcia's past skills relevant.

I honestly found the early chapters to be some of the best because it was cute and simple, and while I can appreciate a complex story(I love Kingdom Hearts) this one falls a bit flat because it's trying to rush through everything to get to the next plot point.

But oh well I guess. I did enjoy this for what's it's worth, I just enjoyed the earlier chapters a bit more cause they focused on cute interactions more often. I definitely would have enjoyed this as a brain turn off novel, but I kinda need my brain to translate so it got grating to deal with the story for hours and hours on end.

Feel free to share what you guys liked most about this story though. I wil try to answer any questions you might have about the story, but otherwise I won't pick up anything on Mangadex for a while.

That's because I'm actually moving to webnovels. Still translating Yuri, but I'm gonna be working on "Reincarnated Vampire Princess and Former Hero, Trample over Mankind" If you're interested in webnovels you can find the previous tl's work up to chapter 86 on novel updates.
I'll be starting with the prologue on Foxaholic if my request to be a translator goes through and the chapters can be seen on novel updates as well. Hopefully this story is nicer to my brain. I could definitely use a slower paced one rn.
 
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Damn, a disappointing ending but thank you TL for getting all the way through!
 
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Thank you for the translation of this ... something between story and drunk ramble as the creator loses the thread for each next shiny idea.

I'm reading webnovels amateurs toss together day-of with more congealed sense and structure than this. I've got enough Stockholm syndrome that I'll at least try a bit of the other yuri by these creators to figure out just what is wrong. It's sweet enough, but in the sort of way I think "I need higher standards" or "did they phone this in".

That's because I'm actually moving to webnovels. Still translating Yuri, but I'm gonna be working on "Reincarnated Vampire Princess and Former Hero, Trample over Mankind" If you're interested in webnovels you can find the previous tl's work up to chapter 86 on novel updates.
I'll be starting with the prologue on Foxaholic if my request to be a translator goes through and the chapters can be seen on novel updates as well. Hopefully this story is nicer to my brain. I could definitely use a slower paced one rn.
Nice. I'll be thankful if you do, it's a fun one. While it's got a more consistent concept, it usually feels a lot more leisurely written and more relaxing to read than Attacking the Girl's Dormitory. Usually, on account of all the trauma and sadism. All the brutality, ludicrous evil, and yuri brain cells give the impression the author was having fun or at least caring about their OCs far more than in Attacking the Girl's Dormitory.
 
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Whaaattt.... I knew the story was messy messy but this ending.
Rushed the author knew they added too much and clearly did not know how to wrap it up.
Regardless glad the two FMCs went out together at the very least and that the jumps and weird timelines are finally OVER.

Thanks for the tl
 
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Thank you for translating all the way to the end! I know many other translators would drop a series like this.

Many of the things other readers disliked about the series I liked (specifically the wacky plot), even if the execution was messy... but this was ending felt very rushed even in comparison to the rest of the work. Needed much more room to breathe. The final panel worked though.
 
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Well that was sure fun, I had an (awful) great time!

At least the screenshots were nice? How do you end a story like that 😭
 
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This ending absolutely sucks i actually was fine with the story and all but really? They died? Thats the ending? I wish this manga had time i had a feeling this was axed because theres alot of questions in this manga that needs to be answered. A shame this manga ended quickly i am so disappointed by the ending:meguuusad::aquadrink:
 
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That was such a long ride. I greatly enjoyed reading this. Thank you translator, and the deaths were very sad.
 

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