Attacking the Girls' Dormitory of the Demon King - Vol. 3 Ch. 29 - The real capture target

[MangaDex]

 

[RandoTransGirl]

The author is really good at making me feel extremely happy while I translate until the end of the chapter where it suddenly gets

 

[Liver]

oh no

 

[Raimik]

I do love some useless lesbian idiot couples, but for some reason these Chinese manhua are all over the place with their pacing and it gets annoying: "Everything is going smoothly!" -> "Oh no, there's been a major twist to reverse the previous progress!" -> "Yay, we've overcome the devious twist and made significant progress again!" -> "Oops, there's a hidden twist again!" -> rinse and repeat. I know that it's supposedly a technique to keep the readers coming back in order to finish the story, but come on, you should only need this trope a couple of times at most!

I will still keep reading though, because of what I said at the start, but that doesn't change the fact that it annoys me

 

[yanderecoverl]

I do love some useless lesbian idiot couples, but for some reason these Chinese manhua are all over the place with their pacing and it gets annoying: "Everything is going smoothly!" -> "Oh no, there's been a major twist to reverse the previous progress!" -> "Yay, we've overcome the devious twist and made significant progress again!" -> "Oops, there's a hidden twist again!" -> rinse and repeat. I know that it's supposedly a technique to keep the readers coming back in order to finish the story, but come on, you should only need this trope a couple of times at most!

I will still keep reading though, because of what I said at the start, but that doesn't change the fact that it annoys me

It is drama...

 

[yanderecoverl]

I was waiting for this 😭

 

[758627]

Oh, the stupid railroading system. I mean, if you gonna micro managing your heroine(s)/pawns/everything that much, just do it yourself or insert some dumb automatic robot. It'd be faster and/or way more efficient with less random "fu, I'm burning everything down".

 

[Blackwar]

I do love some useless lesbian idiot couples, but for some reason these Chinese manhua are all over the place with their pacing and it gets annoying: "Everything is going smoothly!" -> "Oh no, there's been a major twist to reverse the previous progress!" -> "Yay, we've overcome the devious twist and made significant progress again!" -> "Oops, there's a hidden twist again!" -> rinse and repeat. I know that it's supposedly a technique to keep the readers coming back in order to finish the story, but come on, you should only need this trope a couple of times at most!

I will still keep reading though, because of what I said at the start, but that doesn't change the fact that it annoys me

Some manhua with decent pacing come from adaptation, original works tend to be messy.

 

[shemper]

Thank you for your work!

 

[emmadrew]

I've read a machine translation of this before and I assumed most of my issue with it was the translation's fault but even with a good translation the pacing is so bad ;-;

 

[Kollie]

Yo that ending was evil as fuck lmao

 

[karpad]

Thanks for the upload!

 

[DianaLovett]

That mask really looming in the background like "I said no gays!!!"

 

[wlftchtr82]

What is this homophobic Snow White Mirror on the Wall-looking ass up to??????? damn

 

[Manchura]

I do love some useless lesbian idiot couples, but for some reason these Chinese manhua are all over the place with their pacing and it gets annoying: "Everything is going smoothly!" -> "Oh no, there's been a major twist to reverse the previous progress!" -> "Yay, we've overcome the devious twist and made significant progress again!" -> "Oops, there's a hidden twist again!" -> rinse and repeat. I know that it's supposedly a technique to keep the readers coming back in order to finish the story, but come on, you should only need this trope a couple of times at most!

I will still keep reading though, because of what I said at the start, but that doesn't change the fact that it annoys me

drama really is the current year argument of literature, isn't it?

 

[AirKat]

If the system wanted the males to be rizzed up then maybe it should have isekai’d the non-lesbian sister instead.

 

[Raimik]

drama really is the current year argument of literature, isn't it?

I love good drama, like for instance YagaKimi or Octave. I don't like repeated use of the same trope just to stall the progression.

 

[Dominus_deImmortales]

Everyone grab an edge and pull down we about to break this mask

 

[wqytqqmqnyqs]

What is this homophobic Snow White Mirror on the Wall-looking ass up to??????? damn

Snow White- mother fucker I wheezed like a tea kettle 😂

 

[foxxreader66]

Just so everyone is aware, GUYs (and people) it is not okay to forcibly change a girl into a dress (outfit) without consent because you like how it looks and want to take her to a dance!!! Consent or fairy godmother‘s are the only exceptions