Ave Maria - Ch. 0 - Prologue

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Typos in order from top to bottom

"Those candidates to saints. Those candidates to pop" - pop should be pope

"we need to find Paladen" - Is this supposed to be Paladin?

"FX : Noisey" - noisey should be noisy

"Oh, sorry, I didn't know that someone is here... " - Oh, sorry, I didn't know that someone else was here

"was there a clan in these qualities" - Was there a clan with these qualities

"Then you must really want to bethe maria." - Then you must really want to be the Maria (you might want to space this better tho)

"What a bad luck" - What bad luck

Other then that you guys did pretty good! I can't wait for you guys to translate some more!
 

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