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- Jan 22, 2018
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Almost every page has at least one line that's grammatically incorrect.wait what happened? i read this one just fine. does it got fixed?
Pg 5 "Or get attacked by the local race or monster and broken, hisomi?"
Pg 6 "He will do regular report even if late a little" "healy men(??????)" "I even share my level to that product you know?"
Pg 8 "or suicidal that blind to reality"
Pg 13 "it will completely stopped"
Pg 14 "the dragonewt is basically a shut-in, where it's their country or people" "Plus, they look really stands out"
And those are just the most egregious. To first-language English readers the above phrases come across as stilted. Not to be a dick but it seems like you're also not a first-language English reader? Based off of "does it got fixed?", which might be why you don't have a problem with the translation. No offense either way, just explaining why everyone else is complaining about the quality.