Battle-Ready Salesman - Battle-Ready Salesman

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Cool concept, but the art feels a bit rough like a webcomic. Also the the beaten up girl part which just last for one panel could be toned down.
 
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subtext is for cowards, etc., etc.

big fan of this one, not much room to breathe as it reiterates the point over and over but I like that about it, would def be down to see Austin and Magiwa taking down the whole system in a serialized run...!

also very funny to think a corporation created a magical girl-style companion creature for their battle salesman lol

also also, that double page spread where Magiwa pulls Austin out of the suit is killer, loved that bit
 
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this is what would happen if Tony Stark sold the blueprints for his Iron Man suits
 

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