BEASTARS - Vol. 16 Ch. 139 - Running Across the Twilit Fields

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Thanks for the release!

It should probably be that the studio smells like mould, not crabs (you mixed up "kabi" and "kani")

Is the tattoo on Holger supposed to be 機敏? (It looks like there's an extra stroke)
 
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OMG that sloth is so cute. And boy legosi... Your nose is still working fine. Its just.. Ahem. Melon-chan is a masochist a... Yeah
Wonder what tattoo legosi is going to get. And one that takes a whole day is going to be expensive
Many thanks
 
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Fuzzy wolf-type getting a tattoo... He gonna have to keep shaved now.
 
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Seriously, do omnivores not exist in this world? And even herbivores like horses and deer will eat like, baby chicks, if they the chance.
 
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@radstylix The author takes liberties for the sake of a more interesting universe, you have to remember that this is a manga where your jaws stop working well as a carnivore if you lose interest in meat, and as soon as you do eat meat you magically become a lot stronger for a while
 
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OK, (content warning: gore)
stabbing someone with a needle the size of a nail and blood spraying out as a result?
seems like a weird way of tattooing someone, but we're gonna attribute that to artistic licence, instead of the author not knowing how tattoos work… Right?
 
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@Kayyou I think the author meant that it was bloody because the sloth did it so slowly, unless I completely misinterpreted

I don't know much about the tattooing process they use here so I dunno whether that makes sense though
 
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@solchimes

Yeah, Melon says:

相変わらずカビくせぇ~ タトゥースタジオだな

"As usual it stinks of mold. Isn't this a tattoo studio?"


Also on pg. 15 you should consider changing up how Melon is reacting to the tattooing.

What you guys have, is it looks like he's screaming. In the raws it's very obvious that he's moaning in pleasure. Except for the little hearts in the last bubble that doesn't come across clearly. Especially the third panel which has the standard

あっん…

hentai moan.

Aahn...
 
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@Crombs youre right. his extremly slow movements (possibly fast for a sloth) with a continuously stabbing needle might end up causing what they were talking about.
 
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Not being able to enjoy food and disguising self harm by using the tattooing sloth, Melon looks like suffering from a depression.
Also, why the sloth isn't using the traditional japanese tattoing in a yakuza it's a mistery.
 

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