Beat & Motion - Ch. 11

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It's very similar, yet better than beggining of chapter 1.
I think it would be even better if it would be first half of actual 1st chapter, instead of him being depressed over drawing and band. This kind of tone represents the overall series more accurately. Actual chapter 1 may turn off people giving wrong impression.
 

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