Appreciate you work. Just want to state some things. Some of the text bubbles don't flow that well.
Other than some needed QA for that , page 9 panel 4 makes no sense.
In regards to your fonts, the fonts you used are just bad.
The default font is just as bad as Comic Sans and is not meant for reading. The other fonts used for yells are not the best choice either. The font used for the fancy font used for the narrative is just hard to read. You can just look at other comics to see what font they use and copy that.
Writing this piece since I am a fan of the series.