Black Snow. White Moon. Eternal Blossom.

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And... that's it. A story that clearly got massively rushed once the writer realized they had muuuuuuch less chapter space to tell the story than they thought, I don't know what kind of publishing or hosting deal they had with their patron, but I can't help but wonder if this story could have played out better if released independently, their art is good, and their storytelling could have been slowly refined over years, but instead we get a rushed and confusing thirty chapters that doesn't best serve either creator or audience.
 

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