BLACK999 - Ch. 1

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"bullets dont work against the noble" . oww , my stomach...............
 
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I'll await a better translation but so far I'm kinda meh about it. Author seems to be in a big hurry.
 
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First chapter and im already disappointed.

First of all the MP7A1 uses 4.6x30mm
The Rof is 950
"Easily penetrating anything"
> MP7 was designed to defeat body armor at the time

25x8 might as well be an Auto Cannon

Ik im being to realistic here but i just can't handle that like holy heck what is in the mind of the author
 
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>mc being too edgy resulting an important fight scene to be cut
>info dump
>mc is so righteous and hard working montage
>edgy villain being edgy
>the usual strong team loses so mc can save them

What an amazing first chapter.
 
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Translation could possibly leave out important details in the way it is being translated.
 

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