Minimal effort here, I basically just erased the original dialogue, trying to preserve the blush lines as much as possible, then translated and typeset it and left it at that. Let me know if you want me to redraw it and/or translate the sfx! Starting to feel like it gets really cluttered when I translate every little piece of sfx like in the Mutsuki one, but I think it would definitely be improved by translating the major ones in speech bubbles like the camera shutter clicks.
Also, Chiaki's real cute.