To be fair, the premise itself was kinda flawed since the MC being the reason was kinda obvious.... and the move of him losing his first crush was kinda rushed....Why introduce some vague issue with the MC's body in the last chapter if it had no impact on his ability to see Star (the whole point/theme of this chapter), and make a show of how easy it was to fix a few pages later? It works for short stories like doujinshi, but not a serialized manga.
That, and having multiple cut-away pages to characters we never met is probably why this last chapter fell flat for some people.
I really hope that the Heriyama's next work manages to break past the foundations of fanfiction that he built his career on.
You can tell the author really wanted to do that arc.Thanks for the scanlation, this was a blast.
Shame we never got to see them fight Grodd though.
I'll probably wait until all the volumes are out then translate any extras all at once.Thank you for the hard work
Will you get any volume extras if they are available???
Given that before Star is incredulous that gorillas are naked in our universe… probably...is Hypnos supposed to be the monkey in the lab coat?