Nice first chapter and amazing, bubbly art. One gripe I have with it, is that the characters look like they are permanently in freezing temperature and/or constantly blushing because of the weird lines on the nose and below the eyes. There's no reason for these to be constantly there (it's not shadow, the charatcres are not constantly cold/blushing, it's not dirt...) and it just throws me off when I look at their faces. Perhaps I'll get used to it as I read.