Bouryoku Banzai - Ch. 3 - Violence and Friendship

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When Rikudou got kidnapped, I was thinking, " Oh, MC needs to hatch a plan to rescue her to prove his strength or whatever. "

Then I turned the next page and wow, holy shit...this woman is dangerous. Seriously, who is her mentor?
 
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Everythings nice and all so far. The story has a lot of potential but the plot doesn’t really seem to be flowing right now. The guy’s and girl’s kinda been the same throughout. Main girl is great but I want to see her do more than beat people up (she can still do that of course and its fine if she stays as a static character but I’d love a deeper dive into her psychology). With main guy he’s kinda boring. Like I understand hia whole dilemma is being smartest isn always the answer but he really just says that and then gets beat up every chapter. I know this is just the beginning but I’d actually like to see the merits of his intellect more and what makes him smart. Cause right now he feels like soke random a dumb third rate villain with no purpose to the greater narrative. Also pacing a bit quick as well as we know nothing about their families or the two main two’s dynamic or anything and we already are introduced to this wacko villain. Obviously, this might be too quick for me to criticize and I don’t think most of this is the author’s fault (He had to change his oneshot for the publisher) but I do want to see more of a dynamic between the main two after this arc and for the story to slow down. Besides that I must admit that the art’s beautiful, the concepts have a lot of potential, main girl is really fun and fight scenes are well choreographed.
 
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What a way to start a chapter, and I haven't even read it yet. It caught me so off guard I had to double check if I missed a chapter or if this was even the right manga. In any case time to read.
 

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