My only nitpick in this is it needs longer dancing scenes. Maybe add 2-3 pages more? I do realise this is just an intro chapter but it would be cooler to see more.
I took a B-Boy(Korean breakdancing) class one summer during high school at camp, and it was a blast! I've already forgotten almost all of it, though. Lol.
lol the beginning cliche apathetic MC lines were so weird with how immediately shes into it, especially since shes so motivated to get good grades even before