Brinny and the Empty Seat

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This fucking thing set up a mystery or two a chapter without any real worldbuilding or character development at all. I went three chapters without knowing a single fucking thing about the main character except that she's got super strength and she has a decent few of the obligatory female demo fantasy webtoon MC cliches going on. I got halfway through chapter 4 with absolutely no meaningful dialogue or character-building moments, or scenes establishing relationships, or anything signaling that this is a story about people, and another fucking mysterious person did some ineffable thing before I had to finally tap out. This is no way to tell a story. Fucking infuriating.
 

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