Bukyousouha

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wish the girl's scar is more gorey or unsettling to look at like the rest of the fight scene, it feels cheap

but the story seems interesting so far
 
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1st chapter and there's a kid flashing herself, I just feel there are other ways to show a scar off or maybe other places the author could have placed it? The weapon design also irks me so much agghh it looks like it'd snap in a flash
 

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