Bunkiten - Vol. 1 Ch. 5 - Truth

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Well the concept of story is interesting but... The pace is just so fast and it makes the character become bland
 
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Oof, seems like everyone involved is destined to be unhappy.
 
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This kind of pacing is really good, just go straight to the problems
 
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Oh shit's going down. The little detective work is really icing on the cake. With 8 chapters sure looks like it got axed.
 
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Bro this MC's head processes information so quickly man, should become a detective or something. My dumbass wouldn't have recognized shit after the whole shabang
 
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I think the pacing is fine. Even though it feels like the MC is solving this really quick, I'd rather him feel anxious and try to cover all his bases as soon as possible, then go through 50+ chapters of random shenanigans
 

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