@Spicadays Pg 1. "shush" should be "Shush."
Pg 4 "Aight." should be "Alright."
Pg 12 "Did you notice any suspicous individuals?" should be "Did you notice any suspicious individuals?"
Also pg 12 "Nothing suspicous." should be "Nothing suspicious."
Also, implied faux yuri or yuri bait. I don't know if it's crackship or not now.