Busted! Darklord - Ch. 53 - More beatings

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@Spicadays Pg 3. "Inspector, I finally found you." should maybe be "Inspector, I've finally found you."
Pg 5. "Dai Shixiong, what are you doing her?" should be "Dai Shixiong, what are you doing here?"
pg 16. "It dosen't matter, Cornbread is our friend." should be "It doesn't matter, Cornbread is our friend."
Should mention I don't have easy access to the right characters for the Chinese names, but I guess you can understand what I mean for them. Also, I just realised if Cornbread is an actual name, then in the past few chapters, you forgot to capitalise the first letter of her name a couple of times.
 
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It's pretty much become a running joke how the advanced classes keep pulling off one dick move after another and the teachers just sit there and let them, whereas the special classes keep getting called up on the flimsiest technicalities. Heck, the teachers' own unfairness goes on and beyond nastiness but never gets called out because "association"
 
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i hate how the people who translated this didn't even take the time to fucking spellcheck
 
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@komotimi Who cares? It's not like you are paying them to translate for you. It's like insulting people for giving you free food because it's not good enough for you.
 
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Nah man, never underestimate the crouching schmuck, hidden badass.

You can tell Cornbread is a badass just from how actively the story ignores her/paints her out to be unextraodinary. The buff guy, as little attention as he gets, is at least presentable, as is Potato Boy, but when you see a homeless guy/girl/-looking person, you can usually expect some form of hidden greatness from them, be it profound wisdom, unexpected fighting prowess or even high-tier connections.

Actually a really common trope, the somewhat unappealing, loser-ish/ignored type character being a badass in some way.
 
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Jesus this might be among one of the shittiest schools I've seen within something I read.

Either the staff is actually retarded, or they are actually okay/ignoring advanced class constant cheating and bullying. Then students from this class literally tried to kill/assault a little girl and other students with a sword, and the school still did not do a damn thing?

That is the phattest pile of bs ever.
 
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@komotimi It's readable and it's free, also if you want to proofread this and make a better translation of this no one holding your hand
 

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