Celebgram - Ch. 0 - Prologue

[MangaDex]

 

[thebenefactor]

OMG, thank you so much for picking this up!!

 

[ojoudere]

uhmm i highly suggest you to drop this one and pick up another project... the story was so poorly executed that you won't see any real development until around chapter 30... also both male and female leads are so unlikeable... i really don't see the appeal tbh

 

[karolyn]

@ojoudere Oh no, that sounds bad... 😬

 

[tofuchan]

I made it (reluctantly, grudgingly yet hopeful) through chapter 2; but as I expected, the art has succeeded in driving me away... and before you ask,: yes, I do think I could draw it better. At the very least color it better - the lines are thin and weak, the choice for pastel-based muted tones are reminiscent of a bad 1980's sack dress. The characters have bad fashion sense; and yes - that shit matters. If your going to draw for a living, you need to have some idea of the era's fashions, accessories and designs. It doesn't have to be current, but it has to come from a general similar timeline for it to work. Otherwise no one can relate to your characters and your plot can suffer... and that's another thing - your plot needs depth. You don't get it here.

 

[LonelyBye]

So she's a catfish LMAO