CHAIN - Oneshot

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I see some potential in this, hopefully Jump does too
 
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simple and good, old school vibe, the twist that made the villain get a chance was as cliche as slipping on a banana peel but the author didn't want to make the rengade a strong guy, just some idiot that "found a gun" and thought himself invincible.
 
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Okay this is unironically good. The sense of movement and force is conveyed nicely. The first kick that the mc gave to the scumbag is so good.

The story is cliche but the the action is something else. Hope the mangaka can incorporate some of the ideas he has here into Kagurabachi.
 
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Read this after hearing the sumo guy in the new chapter of Kagurabachi originated from here, pretty cool oneshot. Love seeing the origins of newer authors.
 

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