Chandra Has

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Not bad so far. Odd how many groups just released the same chapters again and again instead of picking up where they be others left off but whatever. Looking forward to see what happens next! Thanks for the hard work!!
 
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I feel like some of MC's old group (like FMC's dad) aren't bad guys per se, not saying they are saints either. However I don't trust that King Karna guy
 
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Boy this is like a worse developed copy of ubel blatt. If it were to copy UB, but only cut out most of the porn it would have been better, because thats what made UB pretty terrible to read.

Making him immortal tho already kills all the tension and the battle scenes are pretty bad as it never shows any hits just flash forwards with damage dealt at a later point and inconsistent power as hes shown to die early to a lower dragon then proceeds to kill 20 that bothered me personally alot.
 
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Author messed up. Should have switched Arjuna and Karna's name around.

Lots you could have done with the actual mythology behind the two, but the names are pretty much superfluous. Shame.
 

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