Hi, thank you for the pointers! We are currently a team of two, so some resources are a bit limited.Thanks for the chapter!
Edit suggestions: typos, grammar, misc.
- Chapter title & p2: who's -> whose
- p10 who's -> whose
- p18 couldn't bare -> couldn't bear
- p18 collapse in -> collapse of
- p19 only in my days off -> only on my days off
- p27 She ran the 50 meters in seconds. -> She ran the 50 meters in 6 seconds.
- p29 Good work today everyone! -> Good work today, everyone!
- p29 Sakurazaki it's great -> Sakurazaki, it's great
- p36 to be the best in Japan. -> to become the best in Japan.
- p43 lovey- dovey stuff -> lovey-dovey stuff [excess space removed]
- p52 [This might be a potential error in the original, but there's a calendar that says this is January 2028, vs. the phone saying it's April 27th.
That's how it is in the raw.
- p52 [This might be a potential error in the original, but there's a calendar that says this is January 2028, vs. the phone saying it's April 27th.
damn u cool afThanks for the chapter!
Edit suggestions: typos, grammar, misc.
- Chapter title & p2: who's -> whose
- p10 who's -> whose
- p18 couldn't bare -> couldn't bear
- p18 collapse in -> collapse of
- p19 only in my days off -> only on my days off
- p27 She ran the 50 meters in seconds. -> She ran the 50 meters in 6 seconds.
- p29 Good work today everyone! -> Good work today, everyone!
- p29 Sakurazaki it's great -> Sakurazaki, it's great
- p36 to be the best in Japan. -> to become the best in Japan.
- p43 lovey- dovey stuff -> lovey-dovey stuff [excess space removed]
- p52 [This might be a potential error in the original, but there's a calendar that says this is January 2028, vs. the phone saying it's April 27th.