Chihaya Re:Start! - Vol. 1 Ch. 1 - A girl who's only strength is speed.

[vannn]

Really well written, I’m invested in one chapter, hope to read more.

 

[MondSemmel]

Thanks for the chapter!

Edit suggestions: typos, grammar, misc.

• Chapter title & p2: who's -> whose
• p10 who's -> whose
• p18 couldn't bare -> couldn't bear
• p18 collapse in -> collapse of
• p19 only in my days off -> only on my days off
• p27 She ran the 50 meters in seconds. -> She ran the 50 meters in 6 seconds.
• p29 Good work today everyone! -> Good work today, everyone!
• p29 Sakurazaki it's great -> Sakurazaki, it's great
• p36 to be the best in Japan. -> to become the best in Japan.
• p43 lovey- dovey stuff -> lovey-dovey stuff [excess space removed]
• p52 [This might be a potential error in the original, but there's a calendar that says this is January 2028, vs. the phone saying it's April 27th.

 

[alfirizkyr]

This is so fun wtf I love these two already. Reminded me a lot of the VoSca (Vodka x Daiwa Scarlet) dynamic from Umamusume, dorky rivals who just couldn't help but let the other occupy their entire mind for prolonged periods of time.

Thank you for the chapter—hoping you're picking this up!

 

[ninjacookie]

Man, this resonated with me quite a bit.

The pandemic suck ass. My Uni life practically non-existence. I thought i was gonna restart myself and become a new me.

But life said "NUH UH" all the activities and student exchange program and stuff, i missed it all. I graduated uni and got jack shit from it. All i did was attend online lecture and being a shut in for 3 whole years. It sucked.

 

[swetiyo]

Thanks for the chapter!

Edit suggestions: typos, grammar, misc.

• Chapter title & p2: who's -> whose
• p10 who's -> whose
• p18 couldn't bare -> couldn't bear
• p18 collapse in -> collapse of
• p19 only in my days off -> only on my days off
• p27 She ran the 50 meters in seconds. -> She ran the 50 meters in 6 seconds.
• p29 Good work today everyone! -> Good work today, everyone!
• p29 Sakurazaki it's great -> Sakurazaki, it's great
• p36 to be the best in Japan. -> to become the best in Japan.
• p43 lovey- dovey stuff -> lovey-dovey stuff [excess space removed]
• p52 [This might be a potential error in the original, but there's a calendar that says this is January 2028, vs. the phone saying it's April 27th.

Hi, thank you for the pointers! We are currently a team of two, so some resources are a bit limited.

If you'd like you can join us as the proof reader. If not, also totally cool! For anyone who have read the series and would like to PR it, here is my discord ID: 243066564147019779

I appreciate all the love that the series has received thus far and we are already planning the release for the next chapters.

 

[Mentholatum]

• p52 [This might be a potential error in the original, but there's a calendar that says this is January 2028, vs. the phone saying it's April 27th.

That's how it is in the raw.

It doesn't look like an error - the calendar is there to show the year, and I can totally believe she didn't bother to flip it to April. Chapter 2 confirms the year and the day.

 

[asfhldhg1]

Thanks for the chapter!

Edit suggestions: typos, grammar, misc.

• Chapter title & p2: who's -> whose
• p10 who's -> whose
• p18 couldn't bare -> couldn't bear
• p18 collapse in -> collapse of
• p19 only in my days off -> only on my days off
• p27 She ran the 50 meters in seconds. -> She ran the 50 meters in 6 seconds.
• p29 Good work today everyone! -> Good work today, everyone!
• p29 Sakurazaki it's great -> Sakurazaki, it's great
• p36 to be the best in Japan. -> to become the best in Japan.
• p43 lovey- dovey stuff -> lovey-dovey stuff [excess space removed]
• p52 [This might be a potential error in the original, but there's a calendar that says this is January 2028, vs. the phone saying it's April 27th.

damn u cool af