Like this story theme, second place, one away from first, but above "just made it" third
Losing best trait compared to someone else is pretty crushing, proof like timing and records
Seeing a place she used to hang out now being different and her friend not there anymore, nice detail
Reconnecting with a friend and realising her life isn't as put together as imagined, as she's on tv, is cool, wonder how deep into knowing the characters it'll go
I looked at the raws a bit, not sure where it's going
Everyone's blushing, that's usually used in romance to indicate attraction, but here it's like everywhere, argubaly used too much to the detriment of depth
Art's good though, wish there was at least some romance, like some boyfriend that cheers on, could be present like 5-10% of the time