Chika Idol wo Kage de Sasaeru Ore - Vol. 2 Ch. 13 - Me, the staff member

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This needs to pick up and have something actually happen. Fair, it's only Ch 13 but we need more than just boobers.
Yeah it’s barely scraped the surface of like 3 different directions story wise and the relationship dynamic of the main couple, idol antics, social media angle, music angle and even the fanservice aren’t really enough to actually carry much. Als the sparse backgrounds pull me out whenever I notice.

I hope the editor gives this some direction, maybe MILF booba can carry?
 
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nah fam
This needs to pick up and have something actually happen. Fair, it's only Ch 13 but we need more than just boobers.
the problem isn't the plot rn (i mean we got them big big plots :meguusmug: ) what really needs improvement is the inconsistent artwork, i was literally unable to comment last ch because i was busy debating whether i should drop. but the writing isn't bad, and romance this early on would just ruin it imo
 
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nah fam

the problem isn't the plot rn (i mean we got them big big plots :meguusmug: ) what really needs improvement is the inconsistent artwork, i was literally unable to comment last ch because i was busy debating whether i should drop. but the writing isn't bad, and romance this early on would just ruin it imo
Your problem is with the art, not with the writing!? It's totally the opposite for me. I feel like the author is hitting the vodka bottle hard when coming up with this "story". Sure, I'm not saying the art would be great, but it works tolerably enough for me. I have seen much worse.
 
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Your problem is with the art, not with the writing!? It's totally the opposite for me. I feel like the author is hitting the vodka bottle hard when coming up with this "story". Sure, I'm not saying the art would be great, but it works tolerably enough for me. I have seen much worse.
well can you blame me? if it was just fingers or background characters i'd be fine, but this art inconsistency seeps into everything that it's just distracting and unfun, and when i said i was close to dropping i meant as a whole this series felt underwhelming enough that i considered dropping, however the chapters are short and updates are slow that i can just come back whenever i feel like.

but i really don't think the progression is that bad for now, it's meant to be comedic and episodic which just so happens where my mood is leaning towards for now
 
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well can you blame me? if it was just fingers or background characters i'd be fine, but this art inconsistency seeps into everything that it's just distracting and unfun, and when i said i was close to dropping i meant as a whole this series felt underwhelming enough that i considered dropping, however the chapters are short and updates are slow that i can just come back whenever i feel like.

but i really don't think the progression is that bad for now, it's meant to be comedic and episodic which just so happens where my mood is leaning towards for now
The progress seems about right. I just don't like how random this is, how stuff keeps happening without any logic, how many interactions make little sense, and I also really don't like that 90's style comedy where the male MC is basically a punching bag for all the ladies, with no consequences, no matter how much he tries to either contribute or stay away from them. That cliche "comedy" type got beaten to death already decades ago, yet this author decided to dig it up from the grave.

Perhaps I don't mind the questionable graphics because the story problems steal all of my attention.
 
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The progress seems about right. I just don't like how random this is, how stuff keeps happening without any logic, how many interactions make little sense, and I also really don't like that 90's style comedy where the male MC is basically a punching bag for all the ladies, with no consequences, no matter how much he tries to either contribute or stay away from them. That cliche "comedy" type got beaten to death already decades ago, yet this author decided to dig it up from the grave.

Perhaps I don't mind the questionable graphics because the story problems steal all of my attention.
low tier casual take, this type of trope was and STILL common in most manga i've read... i don't blame you tho, most of can be shit (not this one, it's fine but maybe my standards are just too low)
 

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