Chiyu Mahou no Machigatta Tsukaikata: Senjou o Kakeru Kaifuku Youin - Ch. 83.1

[Khazar123]

Why the heck is the chief looking for a guards approval before giving exposition?

I wonder how much of this bad exposition and information mess, is because of the original author or the TL

 

[Dantrig]

Did you every feel so angry you wanted to beat a guy with another guy.

 

[panchan68]

This translation would really benefit from a proofreader. Some of the lines seem slightly incorrect and/or incredibly hard to follow.

im currently alone on this, so it would help if you'd specify which page needs fixing so i can update it. thank you

 

[kaminomikan]

mc and its obsession with being "human" mc, improvise, adapt, overcome.

 

[Varpie]

Am I stupid or was this chapter particularly hard to follow?

The translation felt weird on this chapter, many formulations that don't sound natural in English

 

[dextersTomato]

Protecc the fluffy loli ------ SECURED!!!!

 

[Kireato]

Why the heck is the chief looking for a guards approval before giving exposition?

I don't think that's what was happening. He wanted to do some evil exposition so what he was actually doing was telling the guards to clear the perimeter. It's kinda hard to tell on page 13 but on the panel after it appears that they are looking at the guards as they are walking away. They're not too far off and quickly return to grab Amako when evil bear dude wants to start the process.

On that note, on page 13, you can see Nea spying on them from a tree in the top right, and on the next page, she's flying off; so that's when Nea has confirmed her location.

 

[pip25]

im currently alone on this, so it would help if you'd specify which page needs fixing so i can update it. thank you

Unfortunately the entire explanation about what happened when Amako's mom fell unconscious is very hard to follow. A few things in page order:

• Page 13: Towa extracts foresight magic and puts it in some other person, if I understand correctly. Thus Amako's question about the person originally meant receiving the magic "instead of Towa" does not seem to make sense
• Page 14: Amako already had foresight magic due to her ancestry. Thus she receiving it from the device seems odd. Wasn't she originally the person they wanted to remove the magic from?
• Page 15: "and it turns out she can pass it on to yet another person just as it is" Who is "she"? Wasn't the beastman dude talking about Towa, a device? Also, the lines about the foresight magic being used in "limited space of her own body" is so awkward I don't even really have ideas about what this was supposed to be.

Unfortunately I'm already proofreading two series so I cannot volunteer for this one, but I would nonetheless recommend that you try recruiting someone. A second pair of eyes always helps .

 

[Nesiax]

K KYAAA ~ . . . . .

 

[popinloopy]

Thank you for the update!

 

[Khazar123]

I don't think that's what was happening. He wanted to do some evil exposition so what he was actually doing was telling the guards to clear the perimeter. It's kinda hard to tell on page 13 but on the panel after it appears that they are looking at the guards as they are walking away. They're not too far off and quickly return to grab Amako when evil bear dude wants to start the process.

Ahhh thank you, I didn't see the thumb so I didn't notice where the guards were facing.

It's still a pretty dumb setup with the heightened senses of the beastmen.. I guess the pacing and drama curve dictated that this scene had to happen now, instead of her jail cell.

 

[MangaRockRefugee]

Yay, indiscriminate violence time

 

[DrSuperKamiGuru]

The only thing worse than part chapters is inconsistent part chapters.... and spiders.

 

[Moth92]

Did you every feel so angry you wanted to beat a guy with another guguy.

Yes, actually. I just don't have the strength and too many legal issues to do it if I did.

 

[BusWindow]

Aww, Amako is so cute 🥰 Senpai who?

 

[Hikineet]

Thanks for the chapter.

 

[mayu_hojo]

good fuckin chapter WOOOOOO

 

[albirew]

Aww, Amako is so cute 🥰 Senpai who?

once upon a time, there was this (dirty joke jukebox) "hero" senpai girl that transferred along with a (vanilla) "hero" guy and an "human (tense past)" guy...

 

[JaxunHero]

Nooo don’t end up with loli fox
get an onee San atleast

 

[AnotherDuck]

A bear beastman with a powerful build... But is he stronger than a dragon?

"Are you saying I'm not even human anymore?"

There are doubts.

That calm smugness when she says she's already been saved. And then the news falls. And then his allies.