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It started bad, got interesting as the dynamics got clearer and ended lackluster. Pity
 
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I was very confuse and had to re read it to understand the relationship. I guess it like how some people only like someone because they like someone else. Once that someone likes them back then they lose interest. It works because they are best friends and okay with sharing or being fwb
 
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@bigsnek i know right? i was hoping hiroi and take would've the guts to choose either mine or themselves, but no. literally i thought after having conflicted of sharing him, they would realize their feelings. shit, my mine x hiroi ship has sunk... :(
 
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Such an interesting story. I like how the relationship dynamic was explored although this could easily have another volume, imo (but perhaps it might ruin a pretty solid ending and get sappy or redundant or some other mishap that happens when a story goes into long?). I think Hiroi is genuine in his wanting to share, but I can't help but feel like Take is limiting his own life by accepting Hiroi's largesse; "Give a man a fish" vs "Teaching a man to fish" short of thing. Hiroi is the commander of the ship. Mine is their toy, but also not. It's weird and although I'd never share, I did think, "If it floats your boat..." because it was so well done.
 

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