Choroi desu yo Onigoroshi-san! - Vol. 1 Ch. 2 - Onigoroshi-san, from the Rear

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The bitch who thought he confessed to her sure is overconfident.
 
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Wonder what glasses girl thinks of this nonsense. Well, she's blushing pretty hard anyway. Jealous? Ships it? Is embarrassed not heir behalf?
 
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at page 5 need a typo
persin -> person
still dat glasses girl got to see lovey dovey everyday up close lol
 
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This guy's annoying. "Indifferent protagonist" is a very difficult tone to nail, only Gintoki ever really worked for me, remembering off the top of my head.
Also boobs are deceptively bigger on the cover and I feel deceived and I don't like being deceived.
 
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@yasashikakashi Boobs always look smaller when there's a uniform on top of them! Who knows, maybe she wraps them? >_>

Also, protag ain't really trying to be "indifferent", as he clearly enjoys (?) spending time with his GF. Just doesn't show on his face. Gintoki is in another class entirely. =/
 
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What is the sfx again in japanese? when someone accidentally grab/touch a bewbs, is it punii〜 or pyon or what?🤔
 
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@Hakin

In Japanese, it was ひょいっ which is "lift/catch/pop" and can also mean quick movement like popping up quickly. I couldn't really figure out how to put that in English so I went with "poing" which is what I guess quickly popping up might sound like, if it had a sound.
 
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@yasashikakashi

If he was indifferent, he wouldn't have called her honey or tried to play the guess who game with her. He's mostly puzzled why she confessed to him, given his past history and current looks, but an upcoming chapter explains it.

@mikoreimu

Thanks! Fixed.
 
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