Chotto Dake Ai ga Omoi Dark Elf ga Isekai kara Oikakete Kita - Vol. 4 Ch. 26 - Black Shadow

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Yea this is was going no where fast might as well wrap it up in super dramatic highly boring end
 
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I guess there is no hope for Hinata to do something hero-like and get rid of the spirits while sealing the rift.
 
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I was really hoping that it'll turn out that Cecil intended to say "Bell has to go back to the other world for a while until we can fix the hole she tore, then we can bring her back properly and Hinata and Bell can be together again."

i.e "Bell has to take a short vacation and go home for a bit."
 
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If the distortion has to be sealed either way, does it matter which side Bell is on? Once it's sealed it's sealed, unless these evil spirits can break through on their own or would do so over just finding targets in their own world...
 
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Yea this is was going no where fast might as well wrap it up in super dramatic highly boring end
I was a huge fan of this, I was willing to wait for it to develope, but chapter after chapter is like the author was just giving us an average harem, I mean Hinata the MC is passive most of the times, act more like Bell is his friend rather than lover, from the moment they got together is like nothing changed, and then they kept introducing new characters.

All of this could have been setup, I am fine with her looking like a yandere as a consequences of breaking from one universe to another (kinda like in FRINGE), but as it is, I don't believe in the menace and the stakes don't feel that important.
Right now Bell and Hinata relationship is almost one sided.

Maybe the author should have stuck to the art, let someone else write it, what's the point of his talents? The most they have been used is for occasional panty shots, but that's just boring and feels too random and gratuitous.
Make your ecchi tie to the narrative otherwise it might as well be a random doodle.
 
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I was a huge fan of this, I was willing to wait for it to develope, but chapter after chapter is like the author was just giving us an average harem, I mean Hinata the MC is passive most of the times, act more like Bell is his friend rather than lover, from the moment they got together is like nothing changed, and then they kept introducing new characters.

All of this could have been setup, I am fine with her looking like a yandere as a consequences of breaking from one universe to another (kinda like in FRINGE), but as it is, I don't believe in the menace and the stakes don't feel that important.
Right now Bell and Hinata relationship is almost one sided.

Maybe the author should have stuck to the art, let someone else write it, what's the point of his talents? The most they have been used is for occasional panty shots, but that's just boring and feels too random and gratuitous.
Make your ecchi tie to the narrative otherwise it might as well be a random doodle.
Of the few hentais turned light erotica slice of life stories this honestly has the weakest turn around of them. You might as well read the OG series for a more put together plot.
 
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Garbage turn of events, if its the axe or just simply bad execution remains to be seen.
 
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this is how we get the 'kill everyone on earth' ending
 

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