Chounin A wa Akuyaku Reijou o Doushitemo Sukuitai: Dobu to Sora to Koori no Himegimi - Vol. 10 Ch. 47.1 - Independence Declaration

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This chapter left me uncomfortably irritated.

Good writing evokes feelings in readers, even if that feeling is wanting to jump into the manga and beat the character up.
Author's done a great job of making these antagonists exceedingly punchable.

A bit more nuance and texture to them would be appreciated, just so they feel less one-note.

But given this world is derived from a game with literal two-dimensional characters and writing ostensibly geared toward younger audiences (to say nothing of the original story itself, that this manga is adapted from), having flat, clearly unlikeable villains that we as a reader get exicted over seeing destroyed, is entirely appropriate, I think.
 
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Brainwashing the king right in front of an untouched witness? :question:

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This chapter left me uncomfortably irritated.

Good writing evokes feelings in readers, even if that feeling is wanting to jump into the manga and beat the character up.
This is why I binged the wn in a single sitting. I couldn’t wait to experience their suffering


Author's done a great job of making these antagonists exceedingly punchable.

A bit more nuance and texture to them would be appreciated, just so they feel less one-note.

But given this world is derived from a game with literal two-dimensional characters and writing ostensibly geared toward younger audiences (to say nothing of the original story itself, that this manga is adapted from), having flat, clearly unlikeable villains that we as a reader get exicted over seeing destroyed, is entirely appropriate, I think.
Depth makes a character understandable and evokes a sense of sympathy and understanding. This is pure rage porn, intended to piss us off so we’ll get the most joy possible from their deaths.

heck, you can’t even say that this “heroine” corrupted her harem because the actual story of the game from the wn was that the prince and his gang
arranged for the villainess to be raped so she could never return to noble society
. They were never anything more than evil
 
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This is why I binged the wn in a single sitting. I couldn’t wait to experience their suffering



Depth makes a character understandable and evokes a sense of sympathy and understanding. This is pure rage porn, intended to piss us off so we’ll get the most joy possible from their deaths.

heck, you can’t even say that this “heroine” corrupted her harem because the actual story of the game from the wn was that the prince and his gang
arranged for the villainess to be raped so she could never return to noble society
. They were never anything more than evil
i think rape is a bit much when you can just execute someone but idk lol
 
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Yeah it sounds easy until they don't have any resources and troops left to defend against the Empire, or maybe another nobles revolting because lack of reinforcements. Hope it becomes true.
 
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Killing her themselves would’ve turned her father (maybe the most important noble) against the country in a rebellion similar to what we’re seeing now. Plus, they wanted to humiliate her
well if they're going to be so bitchy about bombing civilians that would be stupid
 

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