Chronicles of Heavenly Demon - Ch. 10

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Thanks for the chapter, hope you don't mind if I point out some stuff @Lernaean_Hydra
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There changes weren't only physical ones.
Their changes weren't only physical ones.

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Woon Seong was the earlier.
Woon Seong was the former.

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He's cunning like a fox with a physique like a bear.
He's cunning like a fox with a physique like a bear's.
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He's cunning like a fox with a physique of a bear.
He's cunning like a fox with a bear like physique.

Hail Hydra!
 
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Page 1 - Bubble 8

"There changes weren't only physical ones."
to
"There changes weren't only physical ones."

Page 2 - Bubble 4

"Woon Seong was the earlier."
to
"Woon Seong was the former."

@Lernaean_Hydra

HAIL HYDRA!
 

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