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Cleesus Dex-chan lover Joined Feb 20, 2018 Messages 976 Jan 16, 2019 #2 idk i was hoping this series was gonna pick up soon but its corny as hell that the captain is doing all this. Doesnt make it interesting
idk i was hoping this series was gonna pick up soon but its corny as hell that the captain is doing all this. Doesnt make it interesting
Criminis Member Joined Feb 25, 2019 Messages 25 Sep 14, 2020 #3 I really like that chapter, exactly because the detective doesn't let the hero do whatever he wants. It's been put well into perspective
I really like that chapter, exactly because the detective doesn't let the hero do whatever he wants. It's been put well into perspective
Goyal99Raj Dex-chan lover Joined Jul 31, 2019 Messages 1,169 Nov 21, 2020 #4 Beautifully done. I don't really see the pacing issues, since I'm reading this well after these chapters were released, but the story's pretty good.
Beautifully done. I don't really see the pacing issues, since I'm reading this well after these chapters were released, but the story's pretty good.