City of the Dead Sorcerer - Ch. 12 - Encounter (Final)

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idk i was hoping this series was gonna pick up soon but its corny as hell that the captain is doing all this. Doesnt make it interesting
 
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I really like that chapter, exactly because the detective doesn't let the hero do whatever he wants. It's been put well into perspective
 
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Beautifully done. I don't really see the pacing issues, since I'm reading this well after these chapters were released, but the story's pretty good.
 

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