I'll be honest, the translation is not bad, but you made some typos along the way. Maybe you should get someone to proofread your text? Page 3: "My life is still being threatened BUY the kingdom." Should be "by". For example.
nice to see someone give this series some attention. i just wish people would stop getting scared of translating anything degen touches. i can assure you and all other would be translators that no one likes degen and would prefer anyone else to translate the series that are being paywalled by degen.