Climax Necromance - Vol. 1 Ch. 3 - The Goddess' Relations

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Thanks for the chapter!

Typos & edit suggestions: @Rei_Eikou
  • p1 Damaged armaments go in wagon 3 right!? -> Damaged armaments go in wagon 3, right!?
  • p2 & p4 & p6 Good morning Ichika-sama -> Good morning, Ichika-sama
  • p3 A good morning to you Ichika-sama -> A good morning to you, Ichika-sama
  • p3 go for the great outoors play with a bunch of leaves that'd be -> go for the great outoors and play with a bunch of leaves, that'd be
  • p4 um... Glenn-san -> um... Glenn-san.
  • p6 Iam simply -> I am simply
  • p6 The clothes are magical so... -> The clothes are magical, so...
  • p6 Now then -> Now then. // Now then,
  • p8 there's still people there -> there are still people there
  • p8 there's so many of them -> there are so many of them
  • p9 Rather we should focus on what comes after this -> Rather, we should focus on what comes after this
  • p9 we're going out on a trip right? -> we're going out on a trip, right?
  • p9 I-Ichika-sama you... -> I-Ichika-sama, you...
  • p9 into this world after all -> into this world, after all
  • p9 in this world right -> in this world, right
  • p11 No no. -> No, no.
  • p11 organic sounding background -> organic-sounding background
  • p13 beyond the norms -> beyond the norm
  • p13 earlier didn't she? -> earlier, didn't she
  • p14 You said familiar but -> You said familiar, but
  • p15 Seeing you sit there I can't -> Seeing you sit there, I can't
  • p22 dreamed of all in one sitting -> dreamed of, all in one sitting
  • p24 who's seemed to become the goddess -> who seems to have become the goddess
 
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I feel Mizukami is writing and drafting (paneling) this manga and Seto the rest of it.
Seems like it. Both due to Mizukami's writing style, and because he's outright credited for the Drafts (see p2), which presumably includes all the writing.
 

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