That's a strange place to end it, I wanted the long haired chick to suffer more after she realized Satoshi gave short-haired his piece. Maybe some resentment, maybe an accidental death (shortie killing long) and then shortie's in juvee because no one believes her story and for her entire life she's marked as a butcher and she hangs herself.
THEN it ends.
That would be my めでたしめでたし。