Cow Girl Ranch - Oneshot

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Awful. Starts out normal then goes into full rape and just doesn't make sense. It says the ranch is women workers only then shows men out the ass running the place
 
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The lore is interesting to read (if you have nothing to do), and the art is good too.
Still, I didn't expect that rape turn though.
 
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It doth suffer quite a bit from the author not understanding that rugpulling readers is a terrible idea.
Either go fully with Rape farm from the start or keep it the cowgirl naturally.
Also, as Mute said, establishing that it's woman workers only for understandable reason and then making an annoying rapist the focus really doesn't mesh well at all.
 
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this is just too cruel. i much prefer cowgirls that are actually a separate species. this is just slavery. hate the ragpull
 

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