Cultivator Against Hero Society - Ch. 28 - Twin Nuclear Bombs, Extensive Injuries

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I read chapter 27, it's horrible, you did a great job with the 28! I think you have a sufficient level to replace Zero with this quality
 
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@Dunhban Hi there, I saw you asking for feedback in your credits page. I think the translation was generally well done. Some parts of the phrasing felt a little awkward, so you might want to take a little more liberties with your translation if it would let the dialogue flow smoother. But this is pretty much a minor issue.

If you're having trouble crafting sentences that sound right, I'd suggest you pay more attention to the intent underlying character dialogue, and craft your sentences in that direction. But otherwise, it was really a job well done. Cheers. 😁
 
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I’m cheering you on go for it!! It was so much nicer to read than the official one!! Thank you!!!!
 
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Just found this, and im loving it. Looks like a new translator picked it up thankfully. Looking forward to more chapter in the future!
 
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THANK YOU, I thought I would never read this again. I can’t wait to read the next chapter.
 
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@torara you could try the "official english" but to be completely honest, I'm pretty sure straight google translate is better than the garbage on that site.
 
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So could we ask for a decent ch 27 as well please?

And thank you very much for reviving this series!
 

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