Cutie Mutie - Vol. 4 Ch. 17

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thank you for the chapter, and it was at that moment she finally realized they've been trying to out best girl each other since then.
 
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THiS!? Updated? Wow, I am "happy?" to read more of this. It continues to feel like a traumatic work of art, so I can't look away. I appreciate the TLs because I don't know how difficult it would be for most of this chapter.
 
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This is, certainly something. We got:
girl who was heavily abused by every adult around her and who killed herself because of it
girl who was heavily abused by every adult around her and needs therapy so she doesn't end up like above (seriously she's in middle school did her idolmates not think "hey maybe she didn't decide to do that on her own and she was pressured into it" or "maybe we should ask her why she did that stuff")
girl who has done literally nothing and is getting targeted for it
girl who is just pedo-bait (what is her role in this story even? So far all she's done is just be horny for adult men, why is she here?)

Basically I need Hana and Kokuri to go beat up the doctor and Yotsuba's brother and Kokuri's managers and really just all the adults. Or somehow bring Yotsuba back and then do that. All these adults need retribution
 
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i keep waiting for something… interesting to happen. no one actually is introduced with any personality, they just are like placeholders for sexual violence to occur to them. and all the exposition is just this or that character saying so and then a flashback that contradicts a bunch of previous hints and is somehow both not subtle but at the same time only leaves you with more questions than answers.

i feel like this character was introduced and then died like in the same chapter. i mean, you don't show why you should care about a character's death after you kill them. and couldn't she have escaped along with kokuri?
 

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