Daiakutou Shonen

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Boku Hero School (or whatever) if Hero Slayer (or whatever) didn't try to slay every hero that heroed. OR something like that.
 
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@StopwatchTL I really like the work you've done so far on this title, I love all her work. If you're open to it I would like to do a bit of proofreading for you. For the most part it's good but there are some places where I think I could help it shine. I have some past work you can look at. Discord id is the same: ElAjusco.
 
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Let me get this straight - the main character is a boy who thinks he wants to be the villain but ends up becoming the heroic anti-hero. While on the opposite end of the aisle, the other boy
who wishes to be a cool hero in the limelight turns out to be a hidden hero with unheroic qualities.
Is that right?

Thank you so much for picking this up!
 
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Endearing personality? No, MC is straight up a loser, let’s hope he grows up. Interesting manga though 5/10 so far.
 
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Good stuff, MC is an orphan but the writer doesnt show it off as a sad backstory, love humble stuff like these. They actually act immature too, their childish personality is well done.
 
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I like this manga, It reminds me a lot of Boku no Hero but in a different way and without 10 billion different characters.
However, I don't understand why people don't like MC, like, guys, he is a TEENAGER, Obviously he doesn't have super mega cool motivations and he just wants to be like "the best of all". He must be between 14 and 15, he acts according to his age, impulsive and childish.
He has a well-made childlike personality, so for me it's a 7/10. I see potential!
Besides, this would explain the fact that he's not "bad", like, he's a child??? Obviously he doesn't want to kill someone 😭 (wtf y'all is thinking??)
 

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