Danberu Nan Kiro Moteru? - Vol. 7 Ch. 64 - Bulgarian Split Squats
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How did he fit into those clothes in the first place? Wouldn't he just need to have somebody custom tailor his suits?
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there seemed to be a lot of typos and stuff in these last couple chapters, did something happen to the proofreader?
63.3 no hyphen in the broken up "arrangements"
63.5 no hyphen in the broken up "Hiroshima", twice
63.9 "(Do not continue of muscle pain" sentence cuts off, also is that supposed to be "if muscle pain"?
63.11 hyphen in protein even though it's not broken into multiple lines. "*let's eat a high-protein" sentence cuts off?
63.13 no hyphen in the broken up "starting" also it's only one letter that's on a new line
63.14 bullet train is broken up as "bullet-t rain"
64.2 this one's more nitpicky than anything, but "net programming can challenge the cable broadcasts with content that can't air" feels a little weird. "Can't air [on tv]" is implied, but it feels awkward without it. adding it might make the text box a bit cramped, so one other thing could be to make it "challenge the cable broadcasts with content they can't air". Just a thought
64.5 "bark bark has a kansai acc" at first I assumed this was just abbreviating accent to make it fit the small bubble, but on closer inspection, it looks like the word continued but got covered up by akemi's head. layering issue?
64.7 "effective training for your butt, do you want to know one!?" is kinda awkward. Maybe it's supposed to be like that though? If not, maybe something like "So you want to learn a new, effective training for your butt!?"
64.10 "Primarily" is broken up as "prima-ril y"
64.11 "bulgarian squats can be new way" missing a for "can be a new way"
sorry if I come off as rude or pedantic, I usually don't notice many problems with these releases, but I kept seeing a lot of stuff with these two chapters so I wanted to say something.
ON A LIGHTER NOTE: lol @ page 7, I wonder if that's the writer venting about how awful the kengan anime looks, considering it's also a web only show with godawful 90s cgi
63.3 no hyphen in the broken up "arrangements"
63.5 no hyphen in the broken up "Hiroshima", twice
63.9 "(Do not continue of muscle pain" sentence cuts off, also is that supposed to be "if muscle pain"?
63.11 hyphen in protein even though it's not broken into multiple lines. "*let's eat a high-protein" sentence cuts off?
63.13 no hyphen in the broken up "starting" also it's only one letter that's on a new line
63.14 bullet train is broken up as "bullet-t rain"
64.2 this one's more nitpicky than anything, but "net programming can challenge the cable broadcasts with content that can't air" feels a little weird. "Can't air [on tv]" is implied, but it feels awkward without it. adding it might make the text box a bit cramped, so one other thing could be to make it "challenge the cable broadcasts with content they can't air". Just a thought
64.5 "bark bark has a kansai acc" at first I assumed this was just abbreviating accent to make it fit the small bubble, but on closer inspection, it looks like the word continued but got covered up by akemi's head. layering issue?
64.7 "effective training for your butt, do you want to know one!?" is kinda awkward. Maybe it's supposed to be like that though? If not, maybe something like "So you want to learn a new, effective training for your butt!?"
64.10 "Primarily" is broken up as "prima-ril y"
64.11 "bulgarian squats can be new way" missing a for "can be a new way"
sorry if I come off as rude or pedantic, I usually don't notice many problems with these releases, but I kept seeing a lot of stuff with these two chapters so I wanted to say something.
ON A LIGHTER NOTE: lol @ page 7, I wonder if that's the writer venting about how awful the kengan anime looks, considering it's also a web only show with godawful 90s cgi
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Once, my girlfriend called me 'early 90s CGI'as an insult. It was devastating and to be honest I still haven't bounced back from it. This chapter triggered me hard.
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@JumboWheat01 not as large as his muscles
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"Why the god awfull CGI?"
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who is inside the dog costume ? jason statham ?
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This chapter have too much "Cho Aniki" vibes.
Too much.
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the 1st episode of the anime was released .
based on the anime opening , i guess the anime will adapt around 36+ chapters .
the anime will probably end before chapter 42 , when the big brother of the main girl makes his 1st appearance . also the cosplay idol doesnt appear in the anime opening either .
the big sister of the boxer friend also doesnt appear in the opening either , i guess she will be just a minor character in the anime .
swtfghfhnfg .
based on the anime opening , i guess the anime will adapt around 36+ chapters .
the anime will probably end before chapter 42 , when the big brother of the main girl makes his 1st appearance . also the cosplay idol doesnt appear in the anime opening either .
the big sister of the boxer friend also doesnt appear in the opening either , i guess she will be just a minor character in the anime .
swtfghfhnfg .
