Danjo-hi 1:39 no Heikou Sekai wa Omoi no Hoka Futsuu - Ch. 203 - Impact: Sumire Satou

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I think the first bit is a bit awkward sounding, Something along the lines of "Sumire, In university during day time."

Other wise it all looks good.

Sumire lost her sanity too...

The delulu warriors all cope in their own way...
Sensei @BB-62, it would be fine if you just made "days" singular, so it said "during her university day" but "during her day at university" would be most correct.
 
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"Rarity" lmao, here is the words of wisdom from Sumire

Also, what an easy girl she is.
Thanks for the chapter as always!
Sumire is fantastically wrong in that panel. Sumire's sperm donor might've been donating sperm for years prior to Sou's birth. Sou could have hundreds of "older sisters" that look just like Sumire.
 

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