I've been waiting for this... looking really good.
Kana as a Twintailed Gyaru is a feast for sore eyes. Though, I have to deduct a bit here:
I see you tried hard, Kana, but no gal uses "-kun-sama". And what are you wearing on your legs? Those black... ehm, I admit it looks hot, but you're showing not enough skin! Loose socks, you hear me? That's a staple. [4/5]
Now, Miku - I see you went for the plain Meganeko girl with braids. Nice try...
I give you points for effort. Must have been hard to braid your mane, and you actually do a great job acting shy and embarrassed here. But tone down your yankee-speech even more, will you? And next time I see a baton on your leg, you're in for a spanking. By the way, about the legs - you're showing way too much skin for a plain girl - not that I mind personally, but... [4/5]
So, we learn that Hinata rejected all those friend requests, huh? Still, she looks smug here - I could understand Akane looking proud when presenting the ultimate Student Guard Sumire on Day III, but Hinata showing that she has no friends? Well, it could be that Hinata wants to say "Look, I made them do this... muhaha, I rule! Now go ahead and tease them".
Thanks a lot for the clean versions. All the work you do really pays off.
Also author used pages 4+5 Miku and Kana from this chapter in the R-18 version chapters 36+38... I actually cleaned one of the Kana-pages in Chapter H-38 myself, because I really liked that design. Damn Kana should cosplay more often.