Daredemo Dakeru Kimi ga Suki - Ch. 46 - That's Simple, Isn't It?

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This is starting to remind me of those cheap pornwha where the protag just has sex with every girl that appears, then when done the author throws in another new girl.

Then the loop repeats.

Let's see if this will follow the same path or not.
 
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Ah yes very important topic of discussion
Readers: The plot for this series goes all over the place, and the author outright rewrote chapters. The editor really needs to rein him in

Editor: Okay, after five solid hours of discussion, we have decided that Akito’s nipples should be 25mm in diameter. Now, we need to figure out whether they should be perky or inverted
 
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As for corrections, unless a specific breast is the subject, “breasts” the plural is always used. “Akito doesn’t have any breasts”.
Also “the test IS in a few days” not “the test are in a few days”.
 
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Well this was expected and unwanted but we're in the weird timeline So not sure if Gotou really cares for Agawa or he's just after sex. It seems like he's trying not to fail so maybe schools his priority. But he's willing to have sex with Akito after the test so maybe he's okay with anyone. Author really needs to provide motivations for the original MC's now so this story feels more focused.

Thanks @Chekov for the chapter.
 
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Readers: The plot for this series goes all over the place, and the author outright rewrote chapters. The editor really needs to rein him in

Editor: Okay, after five solid hours of discussion, we have decided that Akito’s nipples should be 25mm in diameter. Now, we need to figure out whether they should be perky or inverted
That little author's note tells us everything about why the story is like it is now.

Sorry, let me correct myself. It's not a story anymore, it's heavily censored hentai.

If I wanted to fap, I have actual hentai for that. No one's gonna fap to this pg15 shit.

Author redoes his old hentai work to one with more story, gets bored and retcons it multiple times to go back to it's hentai roots.

But not too much hentai cause then it would not get that mainstream reader cash right?
 
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( I have discussed the size of akito's nipples for the next issue ) Well boys and odd girl place your bets now. What size will they be done nickel quarter or silver dollar?
 
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As for corrections, unless a specific breast is the subject, “breasts” the plural is always used. “Akito doesn’t have any breasts”.
Also “the test IS in a few days” not “the test are in a few days”.
Is it ( the test is in a few days) or ( the test's are in a few days) ?
 
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Wait, so those girls actually are Akito's friends?
I thought they were bullying her in chapter 37.
I wonder what they said that made Akito cry so much and why they just left her to cry in the bathroom alone.
Ah yes, that and the next chapter were such a waste of time it wouldnt suprise me if the author forgot (I don't trust he can plan for the long term).
 
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Is it ( the test is in a few days) or ( the test's are in a few days) ?
Most likely, they are studying for one test, so it should be "the test is in a few days". If they are studying for more than one test (as in, multiple classes have tests on the same day), then it would be "the tests are in a few days".

If you're asking about using a contraction, then it would go from "the test is in a few days" to "the test's in a few days" - the "i" in is is replaced by the ' with nothing added. That said, though, that phrasing reads pretty awkwardly IMO (if you're inclined to put any stock in what one random native English speaker thinks).
 
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Akito... Our poor little naif. She deserves better than this fall into depravity, especially for the sake of our broken fuck monkey male lead.
 
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That little author's note tells us everything about why the story is like it is now.
He has lost it so much he is beggining to mistake MCs character pre and post redo. Why the fuck is he concerned about being only for Agawa when that plotline was thrown out? And her bullies are her friends now? But the concern here is Akito's nipples? Also, the paneling is getting so confusing sometimes.
 
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It's rude to refuse the food that's being served in front of you. You even got it for FREE!
 
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Ignoring the author retconning the girls relationship, our MC was fine doing a 3some and knows that the main girl is going around so he better not disrespect her when she's gone this far
 

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